Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Need Help With Ending!!!

in a little girls room there is a table, on that table there are crayons that are broken and smeared. there is still a crayon in the box,(the crayon has a face) he is the last one left. he has seen his fellow crayons on the table and is scared and terrified that he will end up the same.
a creepy little girls hand comes in and grabs the last crayon. the shot stays on the empty crayon box while we hear screams and scratching noise of the crayon being used. the screams stop and you see the crayon getting thrown back at the empty box and is lying on the table lifeless with his fellow crayons.
it slowly pans over to where the little girl is sitting. changing from light to dark with pieces of paper covering the walls with words saying "Choose your colour?"
it then goes over to the little girl where she gets up from her drawing space and shows what she did on the piece of paper. "choose your colour?" is written upon the paper with the crayons face smeared in the lettering.

  1. i have my first and second structure but i dont have a ENDING that makes sense!!
  2. the ending doesnt really make sense. and i dont know how to make it make sense!

p.sherman 42 wallaby way sydney.